Evaluation of the Draft

After filming, we realised that we need to make the film more realistic. We need to take into consideration of what the setting would be like, because it was a last minute decision. We also need to make the make up on our actor more relastic because we found that it wasn't believable. We also have to make sure that the shots are done in a way where we can edit them easily, and not having peices missing because we had to put some transitions in to make the conitinutity work well. We have now decided that we are going to have the kidnapper and be shown as a completely normal guy, having this big secret. The girl hidden in the garage.

This will work more because it has a better narative. We also might show her being dragged in to the garage, so we can give more of a background to the film itself. When re filming we are going to create it with more imaginary shots.